A few days back when I was driving to work. I got stopped at a red light. It was taking so long that I was late for work! Then I noticed in the blink of an eye. It was a senior, taking a walk. The senior was walking SO slow. It is like, she was going in slow motion. But I knew that someday I will be that fragile too. So I wait half an hour for the lady to walk over to the next block. But then she suddenly falls on the ground. I get out of my car to help her but she waves me back. She stands with all her might and walks off into the big great crowds of New York.
I am a fifth grader and in class we were studying journalism this is my attempt as a journalist.Enjoy GREEN TEAM IS MAKING A CHANGE IN THE SCHOOL INDUSTRY! At Glenridge Elementary, 2:45, September the 25 a group of magnificent people called the Green Team are making a change in the school industry by growing and helping plants grow instead of buying fake plants that die quickly, instead they do everything naturally except getting the seeds I asked one of the members Samanyu Tumuluru, Why did you join the Green Team?”I joined Green Team because I wanted to make the world a better place by growing plants.” “Knowing that you’re vegetarian does that affect the reason you joined the Green Team”, I said “Yes, why because if we have no plants to grow and eat, how will we stay healthy!? Thank you Samanyu Tumuluru. We also have a another member with us today ,”why did you join the Green team?,” I asked ”Because I like taking care of the garden and going outside, and also I like spendin...
Hi Karim! What a lovely idea in your story that you wait for someone old and fragile as you know that it may happen to you one day.
ReplyDeleteCan you check your first few sentences? They don’t quite make sense and your punctuation needs to be in the right place to help it sound right when read aloud. Perhaps a friend can read it out loud to you?
I like the way you used capitals to emphasise how slowly they were walking.
Well done and keep writing!
Mrs Badge
Napier class, Catherine Junior school, Leicester UK